In short: The comment establishes that the agency's justification for rescinding the Roadless Rule based on wildfire risk is contradicted by evidence showing higher ignition rates near roads, and documents specific local impacts in Montana (Greater Yellowstone, Crazy Mountains, Absarokas) regarding water quality, habitat fragmentation, and economic reliance on recreation.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Municipal Watersheds will be degraded”
- “increase erosion, which will add to run-off and water purification costs”
- “More than a third of Montanan's water comes directly from or is downstream of roadless areas”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Wildlife habitat will be further fragmented”
- “Removing the roadless buffer along the edges of this ecosystem will harm wildlife habitat”
- “fragment wildlife habit, disrupt public recreation”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Tourism is a big deal Montana, supporting 1 in 11 jobs”
- “Outdoor recreation is also important to Montana residents”
- “Much of this recreation takes place on public lands that are easily accessible from cities and towns”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “scientific evidence does not support the building of roads as a way of reducing wildfire risk”
- “human caused ignitions in Montana are more than 8 times higher within 100 yards of a road”
- “Roads provided little in the way of meaningful firefighting access”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Crazy MountainCrazy Mountains
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative