In short: The comment documents the commenter's opposition to the rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule, citing specific acreage losses in Oregon under Alternatives 2 and 3, and formally requests the adoption of Alternative 1 (No Action) to maintain federal protections for 58.5 million acres of inventoried roadless areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “destruction of America's public lands”
- “protection of animal habitats”
- “wildlife who depend on the areas that this rule protects”
- “gradual erasure of the 18.2 million acres”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “clean water”
- “protection of clean drinking water”
- “undermine the protections we have in place for these forests, clean water”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “severely impact recreational opportunities”
- “economic benefits from tourism”
- “improved mental health benefits by providing recreational forested areas”
- “road-based recreation and accessibility improvements”
- Governance Policy Process
- “urge the agency to take Alternative 1, the No Action alternative”
- “retain full Roadless Rule protections”
- “broad removal of a federal protection is not the way to achieve these goals”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal