In short: The comment documents the economic disparity between recreation spending and timber revenue in roadless areas, cites specific DEIS data regarding wildfire ignition densities, road maintenance backlogs, water intake locations, and species overlaps, and requests the retention of the Roadless Rule and an extended public comment period.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “photographs proposals and elopements in the backcountry”
- “quiet, intact wild places”
- “Visitors to roadless areas spent $8.5 billion”
- “skiing, hiking, mountain biking, paddleboarding, river rafting, wildlife viewing, stargazing, and foraging”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economics don't add up”
- “timber from these areas is projected to generate just $2.2 to $11.4 million a year”
- “Small businesses like mine would pay for a harvest that earns far less than the recreation it displaces”
- “timber revenue wouldn't cover the cost of building and maintaining new roads”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Water and wildlife are at stake”
- “7,000 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing roadless areas”
- “landslides are 6 to 9 times more likely near forest roads”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “lands overlap the range of more than 300 threatened, endangered, and proposed species”
- “Water and wildlife are at stake”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest