In short: The comment documents the commenter's professional standing as an engineering geologist and resident of affected areas, cites specific data on sediment loading, water intakes, and maintenance backlogs, and requests the agency to reconcile its Cost Benefit Analysis, explain sediment impacts on water utilities, assess small entity impacts, and weigh reliance interests in the rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “substantial siltation of rivers”
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “struggles that water treatment plants face when treating sediment-laden water”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission does not hold together”
- “initial cost is enormous and maintenance is an ongoing and costly outlay”
- “carrying a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- Governance Policy Process
- “regulatory flexibility analysis is not credible”
- “agency must identify which specific burdens are not already addressed”
- “The Forest Service held more than 600 public meetings... It has held none to undo it”
- “agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “travel extensively each year... on foot, by canoe, and by paddle”
- “These roadless areas are not abstractions to me”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “local outfitters, guides and tour operators”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest