In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to quantify sediment delivery to municipal intakes, identify equivalent forest plan provisions to 36 CFR 294.12/294.13, or analyze fully protective alternatives, while citing internal contradictions regarding road maintenance and water quality impacts.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “bird communities that depend on unroaded forest”
- “bird richness declines with road presence”
- “road-noise experiments... cut bird abundance by over a quarter”
- “alter the acoustic and ecological conditions that make forest habitat functional”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “24 million people use water originating within the potentially affected roadless areas”
- “protecting watersheds from timber-related sediment is imperative”
- “skid roads... can contribute up to 90 percent of the sediment generated by timber sale activity”
- “Lack of maintenance commonly has detrimental effects on water quality”
- Governance Policy Process
- “Alternatives with more protection were dismissed as not responsive to the deregulatory executive orders”
- “A purpose statement written entirely around deregulation forecloses the comparison”
- “The agency held more than 600 public meetings... It has held none to undo it”
- “The agency must restate the purpose and need in terms of actual forest conditions”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal