In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS fails to provide quantified projections for road construction, sedimentation, and landscape fragmentation across the potentially affected environment, citing specific page numbers and Table 3 to demonstrate the absence of these metrics, and requests a supplemental analysis under 7 CFR 1b.7(f)(2)(iii) to address this deficiency.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “severe damage to these pristine ecological areas”
- “introduction of invasive, non-native species”
- “endangering wildlife”
- “ecosystem destruction”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Roads increase sedimentation that seriously pollutes water quality”
- “affecting not only fish, amphibian, and reptile life”
- “impact the natural aquifers from which humans draw their drinking water”
- “Road stream crossings create a barrier to fish movement”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The DEIS does not translate that purpose into a quantified projection”
- “I request that the Forest Service supplement the analysis under 7 CFR 1b.7(f)(2)(iii)”
- “no estimate of miles that would be constructed, no sediment delivery estimate”
- “cite in the final EIS where that supplemented analysis is accounted for”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “enjoy hiking, rafting, and the simple joys of bird and wildlife watching”
- “aesthetic loss of our national treasures”
- “explore the Redwood and Sequoia Forests”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal