In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts its own DEIS findings on wildfire risk and legal precedents regarding statutory authority, while failing to justify the rescission based on specific burdens not already covered by existing rule exceptions or to properly assess the economic impact on small businesses.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands than on essentially unroaded lands”
- “The proposal offers wildfire management as a justification for rescission, while the agency's own draft environmental impact statement records the opposite”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The proposal also argues that the 2001 rule exceeded the agency's statutory authority”
- “The Tenth Circuit stated: 'Exercising jurisdiction pursuant to 28 U.S.C. Section 1291, we REVERSE the district court's order'”
- “The agency has not explained what has changed in the law since that ruling”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Runoff into the Truckee from logging in the basin would be a disaster”
- “clean water from these drainages is not a burden, it is the point”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “They draw millions of outdoor lovers now, an economic force that was a trickle when I moved here and is a major driver today”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “DEIS names outfitters, guides, and tour operators as affected parties”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest