In short: The comment establishes that the agency's DEIS fails to quantify the increase in human-caused ignitions from new roads, does not apply the cited 13-75% biodiversity loss range to the 40.1 million acres of affected land, relies on national averaging to certify no significant impact on small businesses despite specific local losses, and fails to weigh the reliance interests solicited in the Federal Register notice.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hiked, camped, and backpacked in them”
- “paddle as far away as I can get from crowds, industrial noise, logging scars”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions from new road access”
- “weigh it plainly against the claimed wildfire benefit”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “apply the cited fragmentation range to the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment”
- “A logged stand can grow back. A road does not.”
- “These are the last unroaded third of the national forests”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency is already billions of dollars behind on maintaining the roads it has”
- “developed through more than 600 public meetings and 1.6 million public comments”
- “No comparable public process has been held to undo it”
- “identify and weigh the reliance interests described in the comments”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest