In short: The comment places on the record specific data regarding water intakes and maintenance backlogs, cites judicial and regulatory precedents to challenge the legal and economic justifications for rescission, and requests the agency to reconcile its cost-benefit analysis and address specific legal and procedural deficiencies in the final record.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “headwaters feed rivers running to the Connecticut, the Merrimack, and the Saco”
- “supplying drinking water to communities across New Hampshire, Vermont, and Massachusetts”
- “286 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for rescission does not hold together”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “agency already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog on roads it cannot afford to keep”
- “net present value ranging from -$92 million to +$199 million”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Ninth Circuit reviewed exactly that state-by-state alternative and found it deficient”
- “The Tenth Circuit held... that the 2001 rule within the authority Congress granted”
- “The agency owes the record a direct explanation of any contrary legal position”
- “The rule as written already provides that it 'generally banned road building subject to limited exceptions'”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “home to moose, black bear, brook trout, and Canada lynx”
- “recovered under protection”
- “Losing its purity would be a loss to family memory and to land I hope to share in an untouched form”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal