In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Rule fails to reconcile its own data on sediment pollution and wildfire ignition rates with the proposed action, lacks a valid legal basis for replacing the national rule with state-specific approaches, and contains a flawed regulatory flexibility analysis that ignores specific economic impacts on small entities in affected areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “286 municipal water intakes in the Eastern region sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Untouched wilderness has a vital role in our water cycle, helping to replenish and clean our water supplies”
- “Creation of roads can generate sediment pollution that affects water sources throughout the country”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Leaving these areas as true wilderness is the only way to preserve them for future generations”
- “Fewer and fewer truly wild places remain on Earth”
- “preserve them for future generations, including my children”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands than on essentially unroaded lands”
- “The DEIS Table 21 reports far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “the agency's own ignition data does not counsel against the rescission rather than for it”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Ninth Circuit found deficiencies in that state-by-state substitution the last time it was tried”
- “The rule as written already accommodates the situations the proposal cites as burdens”
- “The regulatory flexibility certification claiming no significant impact on small entities does not hold together”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapRequestAlternativeLegal