In short: The comment establishes that the Tongass National Forest was improperly included in the 2001 Roadless Rule contrary to ANILCA's 'No More' clause, and documents that the current rule's access exceptions are subjective and fail to provide clear direction for future transmission projects, resulting in excessive construction and maintenance costs as evidenced by the Swan-Tyee Intertie.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Governance Policy Process
- “those who know the land the best should be the shepherds of its future”
- “many important Alaskan decisions are made for us”
- “The Tongass was not supposed to be included in the 2001 Roadless Rule in the first place”
- “allowing for Alaskans to finally have the opportunity to make decisions on our forest as we see fit”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The No More clause of ANILCA (1326(a) was supposed to prevent such additional land set asides”
- “Congress had already set aside 5.7 million acres of Wilderness and 775,524 acres of Legislative LUD II Areas”
- “The Final EIS exempting the Tongass on October 29, 2020, pointed out that road construction would increase from 994 miles”
- “This exception is subjective and fails to provide clear direction”
- Resource Development Extraction
- “a repeal of the Roadless rule would advance hydroelectric capabilities”
- “identified over 200 potential hydropower sites in Southeast Alaska”
- “excess power from Southeast Alaska can be exported to the Lower 48”
- “Only 186,000 more acres of the 16.9-million-acre Forest would be available for timber harvest”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal