In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposed rescission lacks sufficient justification regarding long-term road maintenance costs, wildfire fuel treatment efficacy, and cumulative impacts on water quality and wildlife habitat, while specifically requesting quantification of these factors in the final EIS and retention of the rule for ecologically valuable areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Alternative.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I am a mountain biker and hiker”
- “Roadless areas generally remain open to mountain bikes”
- “Roads bring more traffic, more noise, and more pressure”
- “preserved some of the best non-motorized riding and hiking”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Roadless areas protect headwaters that supply downstream communities”
- “Roads are a leading source of sediment in forest streams”
- “degrades spawning habitat for native trout and salmon”
- “analyze cumulative effects on watersheds”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Roadless lands also give elk, deer, bears, lynx, and other species the large undisturbed blocks of habitat they need”
- “effects on water, wildlife, and recreation”
- “threatened, endangered, and sensitive species”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “deferred road and bridge maintenance backlog runs into the billions of dollars”
- “creating permanent maintenance obligations in exchange for one-time timber revenue”
- “quantify in the final EIS the long-term cost of the roads”
- “weighed honestly against short-term timber revenue”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative