In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule is internally inconsistent with its own DEIS data on wildfire ignition rates and road maintenance backlogs, and that the economic and small-business impact analyses are misleading due to national averaging and failure to identify specific operational needs outside existing exceptions.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “what makes roadless country irreplaceable is precisely the absence of exploitation and intervention”
- “Once a road goes in, the prior state cannot be recovered”
- “Keep it Wild”
- “irretrievable values at risk”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “roads allow more agile positioning of firefighting assets, they are also the site of high rates of human-caused ignition”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside affected roadless areas”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS Table 21”
- “community wildfire protection”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “rely on intact headwaters”
- “degraded source water that road construction accelerates”
- “sedimentation or degraded source water”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “net present value spanning -$92 million to +$199 million”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “agency is already carrying a $6.9 billion road maintenance backlog”
- “creation of an expanded opportunity economy for the wealthy at the expense of people who lead simpler, more meager lives”
What it names
- Works cited
- Narayanaraj and Wimberly 2012
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest