In short: The comment establishes the commenter's personal standing through direct residence, recreational use, and professional involvement in specific IRAs (Brush Mountain, Unita, Wasatch-Cache) and documents their legal expertise in NEPA, NFMA, and APA compliance regarding the roadless rule recission.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “proposed recission of the roadless rule is illegal”
- “draft EIS is deficient in every way, arbitrary and capricious”
- “lacks any valid alternatives analysis”
- “furthest thing from well-done, comprehensive, or legally sound”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hiking, camping, and stargazing at Brush Mountain IRA”
- “families bonded hiking to tree stands”
- “time I spent hiking in the IRA is by far the most memorable”
- “peace and tranquility they offer to everyone who visits”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “value they provide to big and small game species”
- “intact wilderness, like IRAs, are better for the ecosystem”
- “more productive environmental services, like water filtration and carbon sequestration”
- “goes against all valid science to say that repealing the roadless rule will have any scientific, environmental, or ecological benefit”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “more resistant to fire when properly managed under the already existing rules”
- “Forest Service is already incapable of maintaining the roads that it has already built”
- “Opening up acreage to build more roads when the ones that exist are not well maintained is illogical”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledge