In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis regarding unquantified sediment delivery, lack of enforceable drinking water protections, unreconciled maintenance shortfalls, and excluded costs in the economic analysis, while requesting specific quantitative responses and the inclusion of an alternative retaining the 2001 rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Road sediment is quantified and then set aside”
- “Twenty-four million people's drinking water is asserted away”
- “Unmaintained roads damage water, by the agency's own admission”
- “Lack of maintenance commonly has detrimental effects on water quality”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The agency cannot afford the roads it already has”
- “deferred maintenance backlog of $6.9 billion for roads and bridges”
- “net present value discounted at 3 percent over 15 years is estimated to be -$92 to $199 million”
- “I care how my tax money gets spent”
- Governance Policy Process
- “ask that the agency respond to each of them”
- “I ask that the agency place the Cost Benefit Analysis on the docket”
- “provide a reasoned explanation for it on the record”
- “analyze in the DEIS an alternative that retains the 2001 rule's protections”
What it names
- Law cited
- 36 CFR 294.12
- Works cited
- Furniss et al. 1991
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal