In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to quantify the increased human-caused wildfire ignition risk from new roads, contradicting its own data in Table 21 and pages 98, 109, and 113, and requests the retention of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
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- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildfire ignitions increase with proximity to roads”
- “increasing road density is associated with increases in the probability, number, and frequency of wildfire ignitions”
- “targeted fuels reduction, prescribed fire, and other measures where science demonstrates that they can help protect communities”
- “distinguish between targeted management needed to address a specific wildfire threat and opening currently roadless landscapes to substantially greater road construction”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “The Forest Service's own analysis does not convincingly support that conclusion”
- “Table 21 reports a human-caused ignition density of 22.4 fires per million acres per year on other National Forest System lands, compared with only 3.0 in potentially affected inventoried roadless areas”
- “Forest Service research has found that the advantages roads may provide for positioning firefighting resources can be offset by increased human-caused ignitions near roads”
- “wildfire policy should be based on the evidence”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Roadless areas also protect watersheds, wildlife habitat, recreation opportunities, and large relatively intact landscapes”
- “Roads and the development they facilitate can permanently alter those landscapes”
- “protect wildlife habitat”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “spend a great deal of time hiking, biking, and recreating on our public lands”
- “recreation opportunities”
- “limiting additional ignitions”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative