Small family — One letter sent by 3 to 9 people, copied or lightly reworded. One of 3 submissions in its group; the sender added words of their own. See the letter, its submissions and topics.
In short: The comment places on the record that the proposed rescission of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule is contradicted by peer-reviewed data showing higher wildfire ignition density near roads, cites California's Natural Resources Agency evidence that roadless protections do not hinder fire management, and identifies specific geographic locations (Wisconsin, California, San Bernardino, Angeles, Cleveland, and Los Padres forests) affected by the rule.
Scored as the letter — The shared letter of a family, scored once for everyone who sent it.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfire ignition density is lowest in designated wilderness and inventoried roadless areas”
- “close to 89 percent of wildfires are human caused, and ignitions cluster overwhelmingly near roads”
- “the roadless rule has not hindered active forest management”
- “Roadless areas do not drive the wildfire crisis. Roads do.”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “increases sediment and erosion into the watersheds that supply drinking water to millions of Californians”
- “source of the water I drink”
- “watershed and water treatment costs”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “opening these areas to road construction and logging fragments wildlife habitat and migration corridors”
- “permanently alters some of the last intact, unroaded forest land left in this state”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “spend most of my time in our national forests, hiking, backpacking, and climbing”
- “lost recreation and tourism value”
- “places I go to be outside”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Caples Creek
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal