In short: The comment documents the commenter's personal use of specific national forests and wilderness areas, challenges the agency's rationale for repeal by citing Forest Service research on burn rates and existing rule exceptions, and requests the selection of Alternative 1 to maintain the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “fly fish on the Dry River”
- “Linville Gorge Wilderness area in North Carolina has afforded me some of the greatest adventures”
- “Hunting, fishing and backcountry recreation support rural businesses”
- “quiet, remote, and backcountry recreation values”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “resisted the encroachment of human civilization”
- “last wild backcountry in our public forests”
- “inherently pristine areas of backcountry at an existential level of risk”
- “ecological pain and destruction”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “rule already contains exceptions that allow the agency to build roads... when needed for firefighting”
- “Forest Service's own research found that forests with and without roads burned at similar rates”
- “evidenced based legislation aimed at fire mitigation strategies”
- “marginal, if any benefit”
- Public Opinion Support
- “Overwhelmingly public sentiment is in favor of protecting these areas”
- “interests of a few wealthy and powerful interest groups outweigh the overwhelming public sentiment”
- “not very democratic”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternative