In short: The comment establishes that the proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule is internally inconsistent with the agency's own data on wildfire ignition rates (DEIS Table 21), economic costs (CBA and maintenance backlog), and water quality impacts (DEIS Table 35), and requests the agency reconcile these contradictions or withdraw the proposal.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Routing roads through terrain like this... would not reduce fire risk. It would increase it.”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own draft environmental impact statement”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Washington's 1,522 municipal water intakes sitting in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “fewer than 12 percent of the watersheds fed by roadless areas have impaired streams today”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million per year and a net present value ranging from negative $92 million to positive $199 million”
- “road system the proposal would expand already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Ninth Circuit has already reviewed what happens when the agency substitutes local decision-making for national protection”
- “Tenth Circuit's holding that the 2001 rule was within the authority Congress granted under the Organic Act”
- “explain how this proposal avoids the same deficiencies the court identified then”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest