In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the agency's DEIS regarding grizzly bear mortality risks, wildfire ignition data (Table 21), water quality impacts on 1,522 municipal intakes, and economic inconsistencies, while citing Tenth Circuit precedent to challenge the legal basis for rescinding the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “roadless habitat is where wildlife has a genuine chance to recover”
- “increased contact and conflict that come with open roads in grizzly habitat can ultimately end in grizzly mortality”
- “Opening that network to roads puts grizzly recovery and many other species at direct risk”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “More roads means more human-caused ignitions, more fires for already-stretched crews”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS Table 21”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “water supply depends on intact forests holding snowpack and regulating flow”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “introducing roads into currently intact watersheds is consistent with its water quality obligations”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Tenth Circuit has already spoken, holding... the 2001 rule within the authority Congress granted”
- “state plainly what legal basis supports a contrary position now”
- “what conflict-of-interest review was conducted before this proposal was advanced”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest