In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS failed to provide site-specific analysis for the Tongass, Wasatch, and Uinta National Forests, and documents that the agency's own data (DEIS Table 21) shows a 7.5x increase in human-caused ignitions near roads, while the economic analysis reveals a $6.9 billion deferred maintenance backlog and a negative net present value of $92 million.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “jeopardizes 9.3 million acres of the world's largest remaining temperate rainforest”
- “driving the endemic Alexander Archipelago wolf closer to extinction”
- “destroying the exact wild characteristics that millions of Utahns rely on for outdoor recreation and ecological stability”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “degrade world-class salmon spawning habitats through toxic road runoff and massive sedimentation”
- “protect steep, fragile mountain watersheds”
- “harm water quality”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “legally deficient under the National Environmental Policy Act (NEPA)”
- “Failure to Analyze Site-Specific Consequences”
- “elimination of every single conservation-oriented alternative”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “increasing road access will increase the overall number and frequency of wildfires”
- “directly endangering nearby rural communities and over-allocating strained fire suppression resources”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal