In short: The comment documents a specific history of procedural failures in the Crazy Mountains, including NEPA and NHPA violations and lack of tribal consultation, to support the request to retain the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Governance Policy Process
- “consistent pattern of procedural defects in local and project‑level decision‑making”
- “failures to conduct required feasibility analyses, notify tribal governments, or complete NEPA review”
- “systemic weaknesses in transparency, record completeness, and public participation”
- “local and project‑level processes are not sufficient to protect roadless values”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Sensitive wildlife habitat was not analyzed”
- “expose intact watersheds, wildlife habitat, and culturally significant landscapes”
- “protect roadless values”
- “prevent the types of procedural failures... from determining the fate of roadless landscapes”
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “failed to... notify tribal governments”
- “published legal notices only in non‑tribal newspapers, despite the Crazy Mountains being an area of cultural importance to the Crow Tribe”
- “pattern of excluding tribal communities”
- “tribal consultation”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “expose intact watersheds”
- “protect roadless values”
- “durable protections”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Crazy MountainCrazy Mountains
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal