In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts its own prior findings on wildfire incidence and economic data, fails to address the specific impacts on Colorado's roadless areas and 325 municipal water intakes, and requests the agency to explain these discrepancies and withdraw the proposal.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “325 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “not interested in polluting my drinking water with sediment from timber logging”
- “pollutants from mining operations”
- “impossible and/or very expensive to mitigate them”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfire rationale the agency offers for this proposal contradicts the agency's own record”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “roads become heavily used and the natural vegetation along them is quickly destroyed”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own draft environmental impact statement”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “protect the forests, the campgrounds, trails and natural landscapes”
- “I camp & hike in the national forests every weekend to unplug, enjoy nature”
- “threatens the things that make that possible”
- “Preserving these landscapes for our kids, grandkids, and future generations”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for this action is no stronger”
- “Forest Service is already $6.9 billion behind on maintaining the roads it has”
- “costs continue to outweigh the proposed revenue projected to be generated”
- “This is poor financial management”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest