In short: The comment establishes that the Green Mountain National Forest's outdated documentation regarding unassessed roads and trails, combined with the commenter's status as a small business entity, demonstrates a specific deficiency in the agency's capacity to analyze the full scope of impacts from the proposed rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “My business is a small entity and will be greatly impacted by this proposed rule”
- “further economic divides in this country”
- “exploitation without consequence by corporations and special interests”
- “bringing no benefit to the majority of Americans”
- Governance Policy Process
- “agency's inability to see / comprehend the full scope of businesses impacted”
- “Many Forest Plans and their supporting documents are outdated, expired”
- “conflicts of interest as well as sheer ignorance of conditions on the land”
- “The Forest Service is not equipped with the funding or personnel to assess its current conditions”
- Public Land Access Rights
- “provide opportunity for recreation to the elites while leaving most Americans excluded”
- “leaving most Americans excluded from the benefits of their national forests”
- “Public trust is at stake here”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Green Mountain
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisEvidenceRequestLegal