In short: The comment documents that the agency's wildfire rationale conflicts with its own DEIS data (Table 21), that the proposed state-by-state approach repeats previously rejected legal deficiencies, that the regulatory flexibility certification ignores concentrated economic impacts on small entities, and that the agency failed to assess reliance interests as required by Encino Motorcars and Regents.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfire rationale for rescission conflicts directly with its own prior findings”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening roadless areas to road construction does not reduce fire risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in DEIS Table 21”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “state-petition framework that the Ninth Circuit subsequently found deficient”
- “agency has not explained how this proposal avoids the legal shortcomings”
- “regulatory flexibility certification accompanying this proposal is not credible”
- “agency changing course must grapple with the reliance interests its prior policy created”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “DEIS names outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “Averaging away a concentrated impact on identifiable small businesses is not a meaningful flexibility analysis”
- “some of those firms may lose those receipts entirely”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “work I did a few years ago as a research assistant at the Rocky Mountain Biological Laboratory”
- “inspire the scientists, writers, and thinkers who will carry that understanding forward”
- “The DEIS itself reports far higher fire density on roaded land”
- “My own professional development, shaped by work inside landscapes”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Rocky Mountain
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal