In short: The comment documents that the DEIS identifies specific water quality and wildlife risks (sediment, road maintenance, grizzly conflict) and quantifies economic losses ($6.1M/year) but fails to provide enforceable regulatory replacements for 36 CFR 294.12/294.13, quantify sediment delivery to intakes, or justify the rejection of Alternative 3, while incorrectly certifying no significant impact on small entities.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “strongest argument against this rescission is drinking water”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “skid roads, trails, log landings and similar disturbances within timber sale areas are the main cause of soil erosion”
- “Lack of maintenance commonly has detrimental effects on water quality”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Mountain goats, brown bears, and deer are treats to see, but their homeland is being disrupted”
- “retain protections for big game habitat, wildlife connectivity, and fisheries”
- “increased contact and conflict that come with open roads in grizzly habitat can ultimately end in grizzly mortality”
- “shooting, habituation and food reward all increase with the use of even secondary unpaved roads”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Hiking takes me away from road noise and into a wilderness that is blissful and magical”
- “I want my children to hear the sound of the woods without cars running through it”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides, and tour operators as affected”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency offers no enforceable replacement for 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13”
- “The Forest Service held more than 600 public meetings and took 1.6 million comments to write this rule. It held none to undo it.”
- “certifies no significant impact on small entities while the DEIS names outfitters, guides, and tour operators as affected”
- “Why did the agency reject Alternative 3”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal