In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding road maintenance funding, wildfire ignition density, small business impact averaging, and the failure to weigh reliance interests, while citing specific data from the DEIS and FR notices to support a request to withdraw the proposed rescission of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “connect with friends, family, and nature”
- “hiking and camping across Washington”
- “foundation of that experience”
- “organized my outdoor life in Washington around the existence of roadless protections”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “safer from human-caused fire precisely because they are roadless”
- “quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions that would follow from new road access”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency should deny this rescission”
- “Any change of this magnitude requires an expansive public process, not a quiet reversal”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests described in the comments”
- “withdraw the small-business certification and conduct a genuine assessment”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “Road appropriations fell from $234 million in 2004 to $73 million in 2024”
- “deferred maintenance backlog of $6.9 billion for roads and bridges”
- “books lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “name the specific funding source for any new road construction and maintenance”
What it names
- National Forests
- Olympic National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Eagle RockGreen MountainJefferson RidgeJupiter RidgeMt. Zion
- Works cited
- Furniss et al. 1991
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest