In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to identify enforceable plan provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13 for municipal watersheds, contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition data in Table 21, and presents economic projections that do not establish a net benefit, thereby requesting the withdrawal of the proposed rescission.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “headwaters for rivers flowing to the Connecticut, the Merrimack, and the Saco”
- “supplying drinking water to communities across New Hampshire, Vermont, and Massachusetts”
- “Roads bring trucks, petroleum, and sediment”
- “I would rather drink clean water”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “moose, black bear, American marten, Bicknell's thrush, brook trout, Canada lynx, and northern long-eared bat”
- “depend on forest that has not been fragmented by roads”
- “Building roads into this forest would be a terrible idea for every living thing”
- “Let the animals and people enjoy the forest”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “The proposal uses wildfire and fuels management as part of its justification for rescission”
- “Those two things point in opposite directions”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The DEIS does not identify a single enforceable plan provision that is equivalent”
- “The Ninth Circuit already reviewed that substitution and found it wanting”
- “explain how this proposal avoids the deficiencies identified in that prior litigation”
- “rescinding 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal