In short: The comment establishes that the proposed rule's rationale is contradicted by its own data (Tables 14 and 21) and requests a factual correction, the evaluation of an alternative that retains the 2001 Roadless Rule with streamlined exceptions, and the non-rescission of the rule based on public opposition and habitat concerns.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “contradicted by the analysis printed in the document proposing it”
- “request a factual correction to the Rationale for the Proposed Rule under 7 CFR 1b.7(f)(2)(v)”
- “alternative that retains the 2001 Roadless Rule while streamlining the review and approval process”
- “7 CFR 1b.7(h)(3) requires the agency to state its reason”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “immense habitat loss”
- “Populations of nearly every species of wildlife are in decline”
- “These precious areas must be left as untouched as possible for future generations”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “time of significant and worsening climate change”
- “change the default from "don't build" to "build roads" on these priceless public lands”
- Public Opinion Support
- “the public response is overwhelmingly opposed to rescission of the roadless rule”
- “who is the ultimate owner of these lands? The public”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal