In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to justify full rescission of the 2001 Roadless Rule, specifically noting that the rule's existing exceptions (36 CFR 294.12) allow for wildfire response, and argues that the public comment process was inadequate compared to the original rulemaking, while requesting the adoption of Alternative 1 (no action) to protect water quality and wildlife habitat in the Monongahela and George Washington National Forests.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “no road noise”
- “backcountry where ruffed grouse, brook trout, and black bear still have room”
- “large unroaded landscapes accessible to roughly ten million people”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “intact headwater streams you can drink from with a filter”
- “headwaters feed the Potomac River that supplies drinking water to millions”
- “protects water quality at the source by preventing the sediment, culvert failures, and runoff”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The process itself has been inadequate”
- “no public meetings in the affected forests”
- “overwhelming majority of more than 600,000 commenters supported keeping the rule”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “building and maintaining new roads it cannot afford”
- “road maintenance backlog measured in the billions of dollars”
- “shifts cost to taxpayers while delivering most of the benefit to private extraction interests”
Attachments
1 file. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal