Small family — One letter sent by 3 to 9 people, copied or lightly reworded. One of 3 submissions in its group; the sender added words of their own. See the letter, its submissions and topics.
In short: The comment documents that the Roadless Rule protects specific New England landscapes (including Franconia Notch and the Presidential Range) and provides quantified benefits for drinking water, biodiversity, and wildfire mitigation, supporting the request to select Alternative 1 (No Action) or codify the rule via H.R.3930/S.2042.
Scored as the letter — The shared letter of a family, scored once for everyone who sent it.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “supports the region's native biodiversity, including imperiled species”
- “preserve wild areas to support intact ecosystems and endangered species”
- “scientists say we must protect at least 10% of the region for the benefit of biodiversity”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “safeguards clean drinking water”
- “protects drinking water for 8.8% of Vermont residents”
- “7% of Massachusetts residents get their water from sources that originate in Inventoried Roadless Areas”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “beauty and wild character of our region is critical for our local health and well-being, as well as our tourism-driven economy”
- “famous Long Trail and Appalachian Trail traverse numerous Inventoried Roadless Areas”
- “preserving the rural character of our region”
- Cultural Heritage Indigenous
- “protects culturally-important sites and subsistence use areas”
- “critical to food security for many indigenous communities”
- “sustaining cultural and spiritual practices, including hunting, fishing, and gathering”
What it names
- National Forests
- White Mountain National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Green MountainWhite Mountain
- Works cited
- 10.1186/s42408-026-00450-210.1371/journal.pwat.0000538
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal