In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition risks (Table 21), fails to quantify administrative burdens outside existing regulatory exceptions, and omits required projections for water intake impacts, biodiversity fragmentation across 40.1 million acres, and big game population consequences.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “wildlife does not simply relocate, it disappears”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure”
- “foxes first appeared in parts of the neighborhood... and then they were gone entirely”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “286 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds that contain affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “Damage at the source cannot be undone”
- “explain how watershed integrity is protected”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “rescinding the rule does not improve fire outcomes, it worsens them”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in DEIS Table 21”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “The forest stillness that changes my breathing”
- “these are the things I go into roadless areas to find, and to photograph”
- “quiet, remote, and backcountry recreation values”
- “Woodford is 2,456 acres of forest where owls, egrets, woodpeckers and nuthatches still move”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal