Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “threatens Tribal rights secured under historical treaties”
- “Stripping protections ignores Tribal sovereignty”
- “disrupts access to treaty-protected resources”
- “perpetuates environmental injustice against Native communities”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “prioritize the absolute conservation and preservation of all species”
- “likely to adversely affect 327 threatened and endangered species”
- “preserving crucial migration corridors for species like grizzly bears”
- “preventing extinction by preserving crucial migration corridors”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “threatens pristine watersheds supplying clean drinking water”
- “increase soil erosion, landslide risks, and sediment pollution”
- “Road construction strips away critical ecological buffers”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Introducing roads into protected backcountry will drastically increase ignition density”
- “road construction spreads highly flammable, invasive plant species”
- “fuel treatments already occur within roadless areas at similar or higher per-acre rates”