In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposed rescission lacks a specific funding source for new roads, relies on a Cost Benefit Analysis with excluded costs and unverified arithmetic that was not placed on the docket, and fails to identify specific enforceable forest plan provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13 to protect municipal watersheds.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “fiscal contradiction at the heart of this proposal”
- “deferred maintenance backlog of $6.9 billion”
- “net present value discounted at 3 percent over 15 years is estimated to be -$92 to $199 million”
- “selling out public rights for private gain”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “24 million people use water originating within the potentially affected roadless areas”
- “direct threat to the public water supply”
- “Roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- “identify, forest by forest, which specific plan provisions are equivalent... for municipal watersheds”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “New roads disrupt habitats and degrade our national treasures”
- “fix the roads that are already there before making new ones”
- “less than 12 percent of these watersheds are currently impaired”
- “degrade our national treasures”
- Governance Policy Process
- “This document was published in an agency file folder, not on the docket”
- “withdraw the no-impact certification”
- “place the Cost Benefit Analysis on the docket”
- “The agency should... assess the effects on the specific small entities”
What it names
- Law cited
- 36 CFR 294.12
- Works cited
- Furniss et al. 1991
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal