In short: The comment documents that the agency's Cost Benefit Analysis and small-business certification are deficient because they exclude quantified road construction costs, rely on an uncertain net present value range, and fail to assess specific local entities, while also noting that the CBA was not placed on the docket.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The agency cannot afford the roads it already has”
- “deferred maintenance backlog of $6.9 billion”
- “net present value discounted at 3 percent over 15 years is estimated to be -$92 to $199 million”
- “The financial case for rescission has not been made”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “where I go to get exercise and to disconnect from the normal daily routine”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “recreation and tourism businesses tied to clean water and intact landscapes”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The 2001 rule was written after more than 600 public meetings and 1.6 million public comments”
- “This rescission has been pursued without any equivalent process”
- “The agency is obligated to identify and weigh the reliance interests”
- “The Cost Benefit Analysis was placed in an agency file folder, not on the docket”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “378 municipal water intakes draw from watersheds containing roadless areas”
- “recreation and tourism businesses tied to clean water”
- “intact landscapes are concentrated exactly where the impacts would fall”
What it names
- Works cited
- Furniss et al. 1991
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest