In short: The comment documents specific local impacts in Western North Carolina, including sedimentation risks to 378 municipal water intakes and increased wildfire risk on roaded lands, while citing the agency's own record to demonstrate that the proposed rescission lacks economic justification and fails to reconcile with prior scientific findings.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Southern Appalachians are among the most biodiverse temperate forests”
- “protect the last wild headwaters”
- “more than 30 endemic salamander species found nowhere else on Earth”
- “wild Peregrin Falcon”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “sedimentation from harvest can promote excessive substrate movement”
- “negatively impact fish such as bull trout”
- “enjoy clean, safe water”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Opening these forests to more construction and alteration will not diminish wildfire risk”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Table Rock fire in 2014”
- “reconcile the rescission with this finding”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “generating $17.8 billion dollars for the state”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “net present value spanning negative $92 million to positive $199 million”
- “road system already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest