Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “preserves the diversity of plants and animals”
- “endangered wildlife, and sensitive species require undisturbed land”
- “detrimental effects on ecosystem health including watershed health, forest health, and biodiversity”
- “likely to adversely affect 327 endangered listed species”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “detrimental to preserving soil, water, and air”
- “helps keep our drinking water clean with less run off from vehicles”
- “detrimental effects on ecosystem health including watershed health”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “creating beautiful undisturbed backcountry for recreation use and enjoyment”
- “We want to keep this land natural and preserve it for generations to come”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “costs $80k to $100k per mile at the minimum”
- “projected logging revenue gain from opening the logging areas is only $4 to $12 million a year”
- “cost for the amount of roads needed would far outspend the amount being made”
- “$7 to $8.4 billion dollar backlog for the Forest Service's own figures for road maintainance”
Attachments
1 file. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.