In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule contradicts its own DEIS findings on wildfire ignition rates on roaded lands, fails to reconcile the regulatory flexibility certification with documented economic losses to specific small entities, and ignores solicited reliance interests, specifically regarding the Humboldt-Toiyabe and Hoover Wilderness areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “where I hike, recreate, and photograph nature”
- “untouched landscapes are the product being sold”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “I have built my recreation around these roadless areas”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “A human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening roads into these places does not reduce ignitions”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The state-by-state approach this proposal revives has already failed in court”
- “The Ninth Circuit found it wanting”
- “The regulatory flexibility certification in this proposal cannot be squared with the numbers beside it”
- “Under the legal standards that govern agency change of course, reliance interests created by a prior rule must be identified and weighed”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “its own ecology, its own water, its own wildlife”
- “including Lahontan cutthroat trout, greater sage-grouse, pygmy rabbit, and mountain goat”
- “photograph nature, wildlife, rivers, and untouched landscapes”
- “ecologically connected across state lines”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Lakes BasinLog Cabin SaddlebagMono Craters
Attachments
5 files. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
- Own letter
- Own letter
- Supporting material
- Supporting material
- Supporting material
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequest