In short: The comment establishes the commenter's standing as a former wildland fire technician and resident of the Plumas National Forest, and documents their opposition to the Roadless Rule changes based on personal experience with wildfire ignition patterns and recreational use of roadless areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat, biodiversity, and recreational opportunities”
- “wealth of habitats”
- “impact more roads will have on game, fish”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “cherished the solitude roadless areas provide”
- “recreational opportunities that attract people precisely because these areas are roadless”
- “experience the United States as it existed during a time of awe, wonder”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused fires start in parts of the national forest accessible by road”
- “Making it easier for people to access unburned forest will not reduce the risk of wildfire”
- “wildfire proliferation”
- Governance Policy Process
- “voices are notably absent from this proposal”
- “free from the partisanship and influence of local politics”
- “purpose of a federal rule is to provide stability and measured stewardship”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledge