In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS's rationale for rescinding the Roadless Rule is contradicted by its own data in Tables 14 and 21 and activity figures on pages 14-15, specifically regarding insect/disease risk and fire ignition rates, and requests a factual correction under 7 CFR 1b.7(f)(2)(v) to withdraw or reconcile the causal chain linking the rule to poor forest health.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “healing solitude of nature”
- “source of love, of community, of acceptance”
- “retreat to the healing solitude”
- “depend on them for solace”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “comparative data the DEIS itself publishes contradict each step”
- “Table 14 (DEIS p. 75)”
- “Table 21 (DEIS p. 98)”
- “arbitrary and capricious under 5 U.S.C. § 706(2)(A)”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused ignitions at 3.0 fires per million acres per year within potentially affected IRAs against 22.4 on other NFS lands”
- “roads facilitate human access”
- “lack of active management of the national forests”
- “hazardous fuels reduction within IRAs”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “harm rescission would do to the species who live on these lands”
- “wild, roadless lands”
- “protections you consider removing”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gapEvidenceAlternativeLegal