In short: The comment establishes the commenter's standing as a user, recreationist, and scientist with intimate knowledge of specific roadless areas in the Lee Vining and Mammoth districts, and documents opposition to the rescission of the 2001 Roadless Rule based on concerns regarding wildfire risk, habitat connectivity, and the loss of specific landscape values.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “wildlife habitat and connectivity, biodiversity”
- “cumulative loss and fragmentation of roadless landscapes”
- “preserve landscape connectivity”
- “maintain ecological, cultural, and public values”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “96.2% of fires start within 800 meters of a road”
- “more roads mean more fires”
- “science-based, site-specific treatments”
- “Wildfire risk reduction should not be used as a blanket justification”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “backpacked extensively through these areas”
- “solitude and landscape connectivity”
- “most beautiful mountain landscapes in the world”
- “place of love and life”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “clean water”
- “water resources are changing rapidly”
- “soil erosion”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Glass MountainLaurel McgeeLog Cabin SaddlebagMono CratersRock CreekSan JoaquinTioga Lake
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapEvidenceRequestAlternativeLegal