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In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to disclose that certain land management plans relied upon for ESA compliance predate the federal listing of specific species (Lassics lupine, big sandy crayfish, Big Creek crayfish, Sonora chub) and thus lack species-specific protections, contradicting the assurance at page 170 that project designs will avoid adverse effects.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “value its forests, wildlife, and ecological diversity”
- “fragment habitat, and introduces continuing human disturbance”
- “provide disproportionately important habitat for federally listed threatened and endangered species”
- “restrict wildlife movement, and affect the ability of species to find food, reproduce, and survive”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I regularly hike and explore Bearwallow”
- “experience forests and wildlife without the impacts associated with roads and development”
- “Access to relatively untouched wilderness matters”
- “valuable public resources that provide recreation”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “land management plans predate the species' federal listing and contain no species-specific protections”
- “future project designs in these areas would avoid and minimize adverse effects to ESA-listed resources”
- “removal of existing administrative protection could result in a future project reaching the level of 'may affect, likely to adversely affect'”
- “Correct or clarify the statement at page 170 so it does not imply that land management plan consistency provides species-specific protections”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeEA analysisAnalytical gapRequest